Imagine if this was produced by a studio!
Hi, was just wondering if you are somehow attached to White Wolf... if so then congratulations on a fantastic flash, easily the best to premiere on newgrounds for a long while.
If not then if I could be so bold as to suggest you ditch as many similarities to White Wolf as possible, 'cos imho this has the makings of something that you could market and get rich off of as an independent product.
"Good" *for something on newgrounds* and "Good" *for something on tv* are often 2 very different standards, but the professionality of this flash is jaw-dropping, if i'd just tuned in the telly and seen it I'd still be impressed.