the warriors nightmare great style
I gave this a nice 4.
I realise this is your first flash, but you already have a great style, those MSpaint scribble style images look fantastic... i haven't seen that style before so i'm assuming it's original. i think if you keep developing that style then you'll have a string of imitators.
The subject of your flash was cool... i have to admit i didn't read the title before i clicked to watch it, so when i went back and realised it ws called 'warrior's nightmare' it made a lot more sense :p
Nice choice of music, I'd only heard "damaged" before so i guess i'll check out plummet a bit more on the strength of this.
Hope you keep going because i think you'll be great.
cheers - Gossy